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Fractured Reasoning

Like the magic of a dream
come undone,
The wolves usher you to bed.
Their paws, and their maws,
Creeping jaws, playfully stained in red

If you could scream you surely would
to know what to think,
when someone says hate.
If you could scream you surely should,
If only you could, if only you could.

Sterile needles, piercing scream
sacrifice what's left of humanity.
What a horrible thought, dressed in pain,
With tapping toes, as it twirls and flows,
Killing off all feeling to the brain.

Can you see the bloody sea
as the tides carry bodies in and out.
With every wave, every swell,
The heart beast devours a marvelous feast;
And spits up a darkened beauteous, shell.

You wont see the madness from here
so come closer to the heart of despair.
In the asylum people cry in sorrow,
While craziness settles, like falling moonlight,
For they might not live to see the 'morrow

Life is a blow-out bottle of lies
like a bad game of cards.
When dust turns to gold,
Throw your hand and at last understand;
One day it'll turn back to mold

Carving gust of streaming air
boils in the grasp of the world.
Tossing to become free,
But failing, ailing, and ultimately tailing,
That for which they plea.

A dreamer can dream
a schemer can scheme.
But all results will be alike.
You can't ignore the gore and war,
Once dream-land goes on strike.
©2007-2009 ~Werewolfdoggie
:iconwerewolfdoggie:

Author's Comments

This happened a LOOOOONG time ago. I was depressed (kinda like right now), had a bunch of poems for school due the next day and didn't know what to write about. So, I wrote about a (few) characters from organization 13. Unfortunately, I didn't end up turning them in; I don't want my teachers to think that something is horribly wrong with me, yes? So I just made a different (sucky) poem, and handed that in instead. As for the Organization 13 thing, I don't think I wrote about all of them, I left out a few and am working on finishing them...soon. I think.

I believe i'm currently missing Mar-Mar(Marlu-chan/Motzerella/Marluxia, whatever you wanna call him), Lexaeus, Xemnas, Axel, and Xigbar. I will figure this out sooner or later. After finals are over.
Copyrighted to me, thank you.

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:iconpepineros:
me loves. it sounds like a song text. I like the rhyme in here, it fits with the chaotic theme I think while maintaining structure. very good! :)

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Music is an art form whose medium is sound organized in time. The word derives from the Greek μουσική (mousike), '(art) of the Muses'. - Wikipedia

> "Halt, evildoers!"
< "Oh, this ought to be good."
> "...pun intended?"
:iconpepineros:
welcome :)

--
Music is an art form whose medium is sound organized in time. The word derives from the Greek μουσική (mousike), '(art) of the Muses'. - Wikipedia

> "Halt, evildoers!"
< "Oh, this ought to be good."
> "...pun intended?"
:iconbluepup90:
i agree with pepineros. its wonderfuly written. i like all the personification. :D

but im not sure i know what this organization 13 is.

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So this is power. Whoever has the crown, rules-- but that could all end in the dead of night with one thrust of an assasin's dagger!
:iconwerewolfdoggie:
. . . Not...sure?..................

YOU MUST PLAY KINGDOM HEARTS!!!!!! ALL OF THEM!!!!!...and read fanfiction. XD or ask Truth(Rose?). She might know a little bit more than you. and if not, email me on gaia and I'll try to explain! ^_^
:iconbluepup90:
no... i dont know what organization 13 is.

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So this is power. Whoever has the crown, rules-- but that could all end in the dead of night with one thrust of an assasin's dagger!

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